11.03.2006

Another study

Spent about 20 min. on this one Some thing about the arch and the top left hand side of the composition doesn't look right. Yay

2 comments:

Brian Yam said...

Hey Darren,

I was looking at this one and I think the only thing you need to do is complete the arch on the left side or place something dark to stop the eye from going out. As of now, the white areas on the left creates an "exit" for the eye. Hope this helps! Good stuff!

dq said...

waddup yam!
I'm gonna try to get back to this one if I remember to do it. You're right I think this just needed that one bit of framing on the upper left. Thanks for the help!